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KS3 English · National Curriculum · Writing
Mini-Lesson

Writing

Great writing is not about "big words". It is about making the right choices for your purpose and your audience — then planning, drafting and polishing until every sentence pulls its weight.

purpose why? audience who? your choices form · vocabulary · tone

Work through each screen, answer the questions as you go (some pick the best sentence, some sort ideas) and collect ⭐ stars. Press Start when you're ready.

Purpose

Every piece of writing has a job

Before you write a word, ask: what is this for? The National Curriculum expects you to write for a range of purposes. The four you meet most often are:

  • To inform / explain — give facts clearly (a report, an article).
  • To persuade / argue — change what someone thinks (a letter, a speech).
  • To describe — paint a picture in the reader's mind.
  • To entertain — tell a gripping story or script.

Watch out: a single task can have a main purpose and a smaller one. A charity leaflet mainly persuades, but it also has to inform you of the facts first.

Audience

Who is reading it?

Your audience is who your writing is for. The same idea is written very differently for different readers — you adapt your vocabulary, your tone and even your sentence length.

Same message, two audiences

To a friend: "Guess what — the trip's back on!! 🎉"

To the head teacher: "I am pleased to confirm that the trip will now go ahead."

Neither is "better" — each is right for its reader. Choosing the wrong register is the most common way strong ideas get marked down.

Form

Pick the right form

The form is the type of text — a letter, a story, an essay, a report, a speech, a script. Each form has features readers expect.

✉️ Lettergreeting · sign-off 📰 Reportheadline · facts 📖 Storyplot · characters 🗣️ Speech"you" · rhetoric 🎭 Scriptnames · stage notes 📝 Essayargument · evidence
Match the form to the job. A report uses a headline and facts; a script uses character names and stage directions.
Match it

Which form fits the job?

Tap the form that best fits each purpose.

Quick check

Reading the audience

?You are writing to persuade the local council to save a youth club. Which opening best fits that audience and purpose?
The writing process

Plan → Draft → Edit → Proofread

Good writing is rarely first-time-perfect. The National Curriculum asks you to plan, draft, edit and proofread — a cycle that turns rough ideas into a polished piece.

1 Plan order ideas 2 Draft get it down 3 Edit improve it 4 Proofread fix errors Editing improves the writing; proofreading catches the mistakes — they are different jobs.
The four stages. Weak writers skip planning; strong writers spend time there first.
Planning

Planning saves you

A plan is a quick map of your ideas in order. Two minutes here stops you rambling, repeating yourself or running out of things to say.

A quick plan — "Should phones be banned in school?"

Intro: phones are everywhere — the debate matters.

Point 1: distraction in lessons (evidence).

Point 2: but useful for safety & research.

Point 3: a fair rule — off in lessons, on at break.

Ending: restate view, call to action.

Watch out: "I don't need to plan — I'll just start writing" is the biggest trap. Unplanned essays drift; planned ones drive. Spend the first two minutes on a plan.

Quick check

Edit or proofread?

?You reread your story and rewrite a dull paragraph to make it more exciting. Which stage of the process is this?
Structure

Paragraphs organise ideas

A paragraph is a group of sentences about one main idea. Start a new paragraph when you change time, place, topic or speaker (remember TiPToP).

Topic sentence — the main idea Detail / evidence that develops the point Explanation — why it matters Link — connect to the next idea
One idea per paragraph: a topic sentence, then detail, explanation, and a link forward.
Cohesion

Connectives glue it together

Cohesion means your writing flows — the reader is never lost. Connectives (linking words) signal how your ideas relate:

  • Adding: furthermore, in addition, moreover
  • Contrasting: however, on the other hand, whereas
  • Cause: therefore, consequently, as a result
  • Sequencing: firstly, then, finally, meanwhile
Weak → Strong (adding cohesion)

Weak: "Phones distract us. They can help in emergencies."

Strong: "Phones distract us in lessons. However, they can also be a lifeline in emergencies."

Quick check

Choose the connective

?"The plan looked simple on paper. _______, it fell apart within an hour." Which connective fits the gap best?
Openings & endings

Hook them, then land it

Your opening earns the reader's attention; your ending leaves an impression. Both matter more than the middle you might obsess over.

Openings that hook

Weak: "In this story I am going to write about a storm."

Strong: "The first thunderclap split the sky before I reached the door."

Tip: for endings, avoid "…and then I woke up and it was all a dream." Circle back to your opening image, or end on a short, punchy line instead.

Word & sentence choice

Choose words and sentences for effect

Precise verbs and varied sentence lengths do the heavy lifting. A short sentence after long ones creates impact.

Weak → Strong (precise verbs, variety)

Weak: "She went across the room and she was very scared and she went to the door."

Strong: "She crept across the room, heart hammering. Then she froze."

Watch out: "big words" you don't understand often go wrong. Choose the precise word, not the longest one — "crept" beats "ambulated".

Quick check

Pick the strongest sentence

?Which sentence describes a nervous character most effectively for a story?
Show, don't tell

Show it — don't just say it

Instead of telling the reader a feeling, show it through actions, senses and details. The reader feels it for themselves.

Telling → Showing

Telling: "The room was messy."

Showing: "Half-eaten toast balanced on a tower of unwashed plates; a sock hung from the lampshade."

Watch out: "show, don't tell" does not mean never state anything plainly. Reports and explanations often need clear telling. Use showing where atmosphere and emotion matter — in stories and description.

Tone & register

Formal or informal?

Register is how formal your language is. It sits on a scale — you slide up for official readers, down for friends.

Informal "Hey, wanna come?" slang · contractions Formal "Would you like to attend?" Standard English · full forms ↔ slide to match your reader
Register is a scale, not a switch. Match your position on it to your audience.
Standard English

Standard English for formal writing

Standard English is the widely accepted "correct" form used in formal writing and exams. It avoids slang, dialect and text-speak.

  • "We were going" — not "we was going".
  • "I haven't done anything" — not "I ain't done nothing".
  • "They should have asked" — not "they should of asked".

Watch out: informal writing (a text to a friend) is not "wrong" — but formal tasks (letters, essays, reports) expect Standard English. Match the register to the audience.

Sort it

Formal or informal?

Tap a phrase, then tap the box it belongs in.

🎩 Formal

💬 Informal

Persuasive techniques

Persuade with AFOREST

When your purpose is to persuade, these techniques (remembered as AFOREST) add power — used sparingly, not all at once:

  • Alliteration — "clean, clear coastlines"
  • Facts & Figures — "over 8 million tonnes"
  • Opinions stated confidently
  • Rhetorical questions — "Can we really ignore this?"
  • Emotive language — "heartbreaking", "shameful"
  • Statistics / Triples — "cheaper, safer and greener"

Tip: a rule of three ("cheaper, safer and greener") is one of the easiest ways to make a point stick.

Quick check

Name the technique

?"How much longer can we look the other way?" Which persuasive technique is this?
Summarising

Say more with less

Summarising means capturing the main points in far fewer words — keeping the meaning, dropping the detail. It is a skill in its own right.

Long → Summary

Original (30 words): "Because it rained heavily all day and the pitch was completely waterlogged, the referee had no choice but to call off the match before it could even begin."

Summary (10 words): "Heavy rain waterlogged the pitch, so the match was cancelled."

Quick check

Best summary

?"The museum, which was built in 1890 and recently refurbished at great cost, will now open on Sundays for the first time." Which is the best one-line summary?
Recap

The writing toolkit

Match: purpose + audience → form, tone, vocabulary

Process: Plan → Draft → Edit → Proofread

Structure: one idea per paragraph; connectives for cohesion

Craft: hook the opening; vary sentences; show, don't tell

Register: Standard English for formal; slide to match the reader

Persuade: AFOREST — used sparingly for effect

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